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I was checking the Lyrics of the song “
Flower of Carnage” --
Shura no Hana -- on the internet and I found some errors (not major errors but somewhat noticeable) in the Japanese lyrics (how they are read) and one possible misinterpretation in the English translation.
Here are the some of the first search results when I Googled "Flower of Carnage, Lyrics":
stlyrics.com,
lyricsdownload.com,
allthelyrics.com. I checked about 10 of them at random but the Japanese Lyrics and the English translations were all identical -- obviously they are from the same source. Except for this blog:
sarudama.com. The Japanese lyrics were the same but the translation was much closer to the original Japanese song than the other version found on the internet.
I noticed the errors in the Japanese lyrics because I'm a native Japanese speaker. So I made some corrections below. As for the translation, it is up to the interpretation of translator. In my case, I tried to translate it as literally as possible. It’s not meant to be poetic – it's just to help those who like this song understand the meaning of the original song better. Also, I am not in any way negating other translations.
Regarding the identical English translation I found on the internet (e.g. those on the first three websites mentioned above), the parts corresponding to the second and third verses of the Japanese lyrics are not direct translations from the original Japanese lyrics -- I believe those lyrics were created especially for the movie Kill Bill. (e.g. “soldiers” and “jail” are not mentioned in the original Japanese lyrics.)
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The two corrections I want to explain first are in the third line of the song.
1. First line of the third verse -- Japanese lyrics"Iin na naomosa mitsumete aruku "
– correction:
Inga na omosa mitsumete aruku
(The expression “Iin na naomosa” does not exist in Japanese.)
“
Inga” means:
cause and effect, karma, fateInga in kanji characters: 因果(いんが) 因:Cause, 果:effect
The appropriate translation of "
inga" for this song would be "Karma/fate"
Reference:
Online Japanese/English Dictionery(Click on the image to enlarge)
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2. First line of the third verse -- i.e. English translation of the above mentioned line.
Tranlation error?: "I walk with the weight of the Milky Way on my shoulders"
– correction: I walk with the weight of
fate (or karma) on my shoulders
Whoever translated this song must have listened to the song -- instead of reading the written Japanese lyrics -- and mis-heard
"Inga" (meaning karma/fate) as
"Ginga" (meaning Milky Way). "Inga" is not a very common word and these two words sound similar but the meanings are quite different.
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Flower of Carnage (Shura no Hana) on YouTube:
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修羅の花 Shura no Hana
Flower of Carnage (Correct Japanese reading andEnglish translation as reference.)
唄 梶芽衣子
作詞 小池一雄
作曲 平尾昌晃
Song: Kaji Meiko
Lyrics: Koike Kazuo
Music: Hirao Masaai
死んでいた朝に とむらいの雪が降る
はぐれ犬の遠吠え 下駄の音きしむ
いんがなおもさ みつめて歩く
闇を抱きしめる 蛇の目の傘一つ
いのちの道を行く女 涙はとうに捨てました
Shinde ita asa ni tomurai no yuki ga furu
Hagure inu no tooboe Geta no oto kishimu
Inga na omosa mitsumete aruku
Yami o dakishimeru Janome no kasa hitotsu
Inochi no michi wo yuku onna namida wa tooni sutemashita
In the dead morning, I see snow of vengeance falling from the sky
Stray dogs howl and the sound of my Geta groaning
I walk on with my eyes focused on the weight of my karma
Embracing darkness, just a wooden umbrella in my hand
I am a woman who treads the road of destiny;
it has been long since I cast away my tears
ふりむいた川に 遠ざかる旅の灯が
凍てた鶴は動かず 哭いた雨と風
冷えた水面に ほつれ髪映し
涙さえ見せない 蛇の目の傘一つ
怨みの道を行く女 心はとうに捨てました
Furimuita kawa ni toozakaru tabi no hi ga
Itetsuita tsuru wa ugogazu naita ame to kaze
Hieta minamo ni hotsure-gami utsushi
Namida sae misenai Janome no kasa hitotsu
Urami no michi wo yuku onna kokoro wa tooni sutemashita
I look back at the river mirroring reflections of the receding lights of the journey
Cranes stand still in the freezing cold, rain and wind cry out loud
Shadow of my disheveled hair on the icy water surface
I won't even shed a drop of tear, just a wooden umbrella in my hand
I am a woman who treads the road of vengeance;
it has been long since I discarded my heart
義理も情も 涙も夢も
昨日も明日も 縁のない言葉
怨みの川に身をゆだね
女はとうに捨てました
Giri mo jou mo namida mo yume mo
Kinou mo ashita mo en no nai kotoba
Urami no kawa ni mi o yudane
Onna wa tooni sute mashita
Obligations and mercy, tears and dreams
I am stranger to them yesterday or tomorrow
I entrust myself to the river of vengeance
It has been long since I abandoned my womanhood=====
Japanese Lyric Corrections (wrong readings are highlighted in
red, corrections are shown in
green)
Shura no Hana (Flowers of Carnage) Japanese LyricsShindeita
Asa ni
Tomorai no =>
Tomurai no
Yuki ga furu
Hagure inu no
Tooboe
Geta no
Otokishimu
Iin na naomosa* =>
Inga na omosa[*As I mentioned above, "Iin na naomosa" does not have any meaning in Japanese...]
Mitsumete aruku
Yami wo dakishimeru
Janomeno kasa hitotsu
Inochi no michi wo
Yuku onna
Namida wa tooni
Sutemashita
Furimuita
Kawa ni
Toozakaru
Tabinohima =>
Tabino hi gaItteta* tsuru wa =>
Itetsui ta tsuru wa
[*"Itteta" has no meaning in Japanese.]
Ugokasu* =
Ugokazu[*"Ugokasu" is to move something, "Ugokazu" is to be immobile.]
Naita
Ame to kaze
Kieta* mizu mo ni =>
Hieta mizumo ni
[*"Kieta" means "vanished," "Hieta" means "icy"]
Hotsure
ga miutsushi* = Hotsure-
gami utsushi[*This is not phonetically wrong but "Gami" (a suffix form of "kami"=hair) is one word]
Namida sae misenai
Janomeno kasa hitotsu
Urami no michi wo
Yuku onna
Kokoro wa tooni
Sutemashita
Giri mo nasake mo
Namida mo yume
no* => Namida mo yume
mo
[*"no" means "of," "mo" means "also."]
Kinou mo ashita mo
Henno* nai kotoba =>
Enno nai kotoba
[*"Henno" has no meaning.]
Urami no kawa ni
Mi wo
yudanete =>
Mi wo yudaneHonma* wa tooni
=> Onna wa tooni
[*"Honma" is "Real/True" in Japanese dialect, "Onna" is woman.]
Sutemashita
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Thanks for reading!